Write a letter to your professor outlining why you are not satisfied with their course. In your letter: write the reasons why you are not satisfied with the course request to change your course indicate what course you want to take instead Write at least 150 words. You get 20 minutes to complete this task.

Dear Mr. Donovon, Greetings! I ,Avinash Sharma, have joined the newly opened
course
on Nail extensions at your prestigious institution.
Initially
,
along with
theory classes practical classes were
also
there, but as the
course
progressed no hands-on experience
is
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was
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being given to us.
Moreover
,as promised to us by authorities at the time of admission, Neither there are any useful workshops nor
there
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are there
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any visits to a renowned make-up artist's parlour.
Hence
, for me,
this
course
is proving no usefulness.
However
, I came to know from my seniors that I can shift to the
course
of eyelashes as the faculty is a professional one and it provides all the practical experience . So,I ask you to kindly allow me to change my
course
so that I can get a desirable job and I can excel in my field. I am looking forward to getting a swift response. Yours Sincerely, Avinash Sharma.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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