The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph describes the percentage of the
population
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aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in
Japan
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,Sweden and the
USA
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. In 1940 ,the
USA
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had the highest
proportion
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of the
population
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aged 65 and over about 9%,
while
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the figure in
Japan
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had the lowest at 5% and
then
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the
USA
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increased to about 15% in 1980 and remained in after 40 years. And there will be an upward trend until 2040 at about 3%.In 1940 the
proportion
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of the
population
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aged 65 and over in Sweden was about 7% and it will increase to 25% in 2040.After 1990, Sweden had a higher
proportion
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of elder people than the
USA
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.
Japan
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remained at about 5% between 1940 and 2005
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after 2030 there will be a sharp upward trend beyond the other two countries about 27% in 2040. In the past
Japan
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always had the lowest
proportion
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of the
population
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aged 65 and over.In the future, it will be the highest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, japan, usa, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • aging population
  • proportion
  • elderly
  • significant increase
  • surpass
  • gradual increase
  • crucial period
  • rapid increase
  • healthcare advancements
  • lower birth rates
  • projections
  • adjustments in social services
  • demographic dynamics
  • lifestyle choices
  • trends
  • notable
  • potentially
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