The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the different factors contributing to
air
corruption in China
, America, Japan and Australia in the year 2021. Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that China
is the most polluted country among the four whereas
Australia has the lowest levels of air
corruption. In China
, abuse caused by power production, transport and industry is 60 PPM
, 70 PPM
and 80 PPM
respectively. In America, transport causes the maximum air
corruption of around 58ppm whereas
the other two sectors cause considerably less pollution (around 30PPM each). America is also
the second most polluted country on the list. In Japan, the trend is similar to that of China
with power generation causing the least (18PPM) and industries causing the most (42PPM) air
pollution. Transport causes about 30 PPM
abuses in Japan. Australia is the least polluted country and all the aforementioned sectors cause almost similar levels of pollution at around 20 PPM
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