The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows the different factors contributing to

air

corruption in

China

, America, Japan and Australia in the year 2021.

Overall

, it can be seen from the graph that

China

is the most polluted country among the four

whereas

Australia has the lowest levels of

air

corruption. In

China

, abuse caused by power production, transport and industry is 60

PPM

, 70

PPM

and 80

PPM

respectively. In America, transport causes the maximum

air

corruption of around 58ppm

whereas

the other two sectors cause considerably less pollution (around 30PPM each). America is

also

the second most polluted country on the list. In Japan, the trend is similar to that of

China

with power generation causing the least (18PPM) and industries causing the most (42PPM)

air

pollution. Transport causes about 30

PPM

abuses in Japan. Australia is the least polluted country and all the aforementioned sectors cause almost similar levels of pollution at around 20

PPM

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The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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