The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012.
The given graph illustrates changes in three types of crime (burglary,
car
theft and robbery) which were committed in Manchester City over 9 years between 2003-2012 years.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of burglaries dropped significantly over the given period, while
the number
of car
thefts increased gradually. At the beginning of the period, burglary was the most prevalent crime in Machester City, but after 2006, car
theft became the most committed crime.
With regards to the number
of burglaries, it began with 3400 cases and then
peaked at about 3700 in 2004 before falling dramatically to about 1400 in the last
year. In contrast
, approximately 2300 car
thefts were perpetrated in the first year, after which it gradually rose to 2700 cases in 2012 and reached the highest rate in the last
six years.
In contrast
, the number
of robberiescrimes was at about 600 in 2003 and reached a peak in 2005. After that, it declined slightly to approximately 600 crimes in the last
year.Submitted by s_syedy on
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