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Some children can leran more efficiently by watching t.v. therefore ,children should watching T.v regularly both in school and at home ? do you agree or not ?

#children #leran #v #school #home
Nowadays, people discuss about
children
, that they can grasp new things with more speed
while
 watching television. If questioned to me,
Either
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children
 should watch
tv
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TV
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, frequently or not,
then
 I would always support that, they should not watch
t.
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TV
v
 frequently. The foremost reason that they should not watch
t.
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TV
v
while
 studying is that,
they
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it
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 will weaken their eye-sight, and
they
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as they
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 grow old, they may suffer from eye disease.
Further
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 there are other problems as
,
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 now on
t
.
v
 very much uncensored stuff is played which is not good for a growing
child
,
this
 could lead a
child
 to
wrong
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 path. Another reason for not letting
children
t.
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watch TV
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v
while
 studying is that
,
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 It is very
much
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important for a
child
 to learn how to focus, and when trying to do two things at a time, it will lower their efficiency and quality of work.
However
 some people may say that
while
 watching
t.
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TV
v
 efficiency of studying may increase, he/she will score more marks, but for
short
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the short
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 term only. 
Concluding
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, we can say that
t.
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TV
v
are
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is
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 not really nice for
the
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children
,
it's
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its
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 usage should be as
minimum
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minimal
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 as possible, preventing the
child
 from spoiling and
to maintain
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maintaining
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 his/her good health.
While
 studying he/she should only focus on whatever he/she is studying.
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