This diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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is

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a

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diagram

reprsents

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represents

the

process

for

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of

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recycling

plastic

bottles

. There are

sereval

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several

steps involved in the

process

of recycling.

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,

the

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plastic

bottles

is

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recycled and it produces

a useful

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a useful product

useful products

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products

. We should reduce the use of

plastic

bottles

in our daily

life style

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lifestyle

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. In detail, there are some methods for recycling

the

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plastic

bottles

they are

puting

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putting

the

wastes

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waste

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into the garbage,

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transferring it

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to the transport, recycling centre,compressing

into

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it into

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blocks, crushing,washing, producing

plastic

pellets,heating pellets to form raw materials and producing end

products

.

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we should put the

plastic

into the garbage and

those

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waste including

plastic

are

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been

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carried by

the

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transport for the next

process

. The

process

is recycling centre,

that is

sorting. They separate the

plastic

bottles

from the other waste

products

. Those

plastic

bottles

are compressed into blocks

it

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is the fourth

process

. They are been crushed and put into the tub for washing. The sixth step is producing

plastic

pellets and they are heated, to form raw materials. The raw materials are formed and

final

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process

is producing some useful

products

. We the people should reduce the usage of

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plastic

items. We should make our environment look neat and clean.