You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart represents the amount of international visitors to the preferred destinations in a particular European country, namely lakes, mountains, and beaches. As observed from the graph, there are several highlights from these three categories, separated in a five-year period from 1987 to 2007.
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the share of these three sites experienced a rise, there was a dramatic turn in the lakes' visitors. Guests who arrived at the coastal venue were the highest of all three in 1987 and 2007.
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experienced a slight decrease in 1992, they almost doubled to 75 thousand people in 2007. In comparison, the mountains remained the least
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areas, with only 20 thousand in 1987, and increased slowly to around 35 thousand individuals in 2007.
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, lake destinations had the most fluctuating pattern from the other two. Received as low as 10,000 in 1987, rapid growth occurred until 2002 when they had more than 70,000 visitors but
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dropped significantly to only 50,000 in 2007.
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