The graph gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007

The graph gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007
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The picture illustrates the processes by which pineapple
juice
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,pineapple
jam
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and the export of boxes of
pineapples
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through oceans are done.
Overall
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,it is important to note that the
process
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commences with grinding
pineapples
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into smaller slices for both
jam
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and
juice
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and ends by either extraction of
pineapples
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for
juice
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or cutting of
pineapples
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into small slices.For export,the
process
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involves 3 main stages, beginning with washing and waxing big
pineapples
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and ending with the transportation of packaged
pineapples
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through ships.
Firstly
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, the grown
pineapples
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under 28-30 centigrade of sun heat are washed with water .
This
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is the phase when the
process
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diverges,all
pineapples
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which are 26 cm in size are grated into smaller slices, and
then
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they are extracted by special machines.
Finally
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,the pineapple
juice
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is ready to be consumed.In terms of
jam
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, the
process
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begins with cutting
pineapples
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into small sizes after which cut
pineapples
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are packed in
jam
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cans. Looking at the third product,
pineapples
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which are mixed with chemicals and are 30cm in size are washed with wax in the first step.Afterwards,they are packed in boxes ,and
at the end
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stage, they are transported by ships through oceans.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words juice, jam, pineapples, process with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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