The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.

The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.
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The pie chart illustrates the rate of
counsumers
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consumers
yearly
expenditure
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on 7 types of different consumer goods in
USA
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the USA
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in 1966.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the largest share of
expenditure
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was on food items followed by
transports
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transport
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, furniture, petrol and
resturants
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restaurants
. The smallest
potrion
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portion
of spending
were
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was
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behind computers and books. Focusing on food and cars, which shared 44% and 23%, respectively
throught
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through
throughout
the year. In
total
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total,
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they constituted over
two third
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two-thirds
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of the pie
whilest
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whilst
while
others shared the rest.
This
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indicates these two sectors were the costliest
one
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ones
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.
On the contrary
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, money spent
behind
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on
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furniture, petrol,
resturents
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restaurants
and books
were
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was
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10%,9%,7% and 6%, respectively.
However
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, the
expenditure
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on computers was only a tiny portion
if
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of
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the total public
expenditure
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • budget
  • housing
  • transportation
  • food and drinks
  • healthcare
  • education
  • categories
  • percentage
  • financial burden
  • prioritize
  • mobility
  • services
  • sprawling
  • indulging
  • culinary experiences
  • groceries
  • importance
  • coverage
  • allocation
  • miscellaneous expenses
  • entertainment
  • personal care
  • leisure activities
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