The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.
The
given
pie chart illustrates the rates of spending for seven different items in the USA in the year Verb problem
apply
of
1966.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
the majority of expenditure represented
in the category of food, Add a missing verb
is represented
whereas
the least popular field was computers.
In 1966, the most popular field which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
spend
on was food and Wrong verb form
spent
this
category represented in
44 Change preposition
apply
percent
which was approximately doubled the second Change the spelling
per cent
popular
field, cars (23%). when these two Correct quantifier usage
most popular
category
added, they Change to a plural noun
categories
accoounted
for almost four in five of total Correct your spelling
accounted
expenditure
. The percentage of expenditure Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
for
furniture and petrol were quite similar and accounted for 10 Change preposition
on
percent
and 9 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively. The rate of restaurants and books were Change the spelling
per cent
close
, as well, and when they combined Replace the word
closed
respresented
in 13 Correct your spelling
represented
percent
of total spending in 1966. according to
the given chart the least popular spending at
that year on computers at 1 Change preposition
in
percent
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