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.The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

.The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph displays the answers to a questionnaire about individuals’ habits in purchasing
coffee
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 and tea in the
last
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 four weeks in Australian cities.
Overall
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, the most common habit is to go to a café for
coffee
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 or tea.
Adelaide
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 has a
proportion
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 higher at buying instant
coffee
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. The other significant feature of
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 graph is that fresh
coffee
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 is the least sold. In Hobart, approximately 63% of people went to a café for
coffee
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 or tea, 1% less than Melbourne in second place, which had a percentage of around 62%, followed by Sydney with 60%. Brisbane and
Adelaide
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 had nearly 55% and 49% of individuals respectively that went to a café. Brisbane had the highest
proportion
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 of people going for an instant
coffee
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, which was 54%,
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 Hobart with approximately 52%,
while
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Adelaide
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 had a similar
proportion
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 as those who went to a café, which was a percentage of 50%. Sydney had the least number of people purchasing instant
coffee
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, with 45%, which is 3% less than Melbourne. Fresh
coffee
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 was bought principally in Hobart, with a portion of 48%, followed by Sydney and Melbourne with around 43% each. Brisban and
Adelaide
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 had a similar
proportion
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, which was almost 35% for each one.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, café, adelaide, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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