The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The line graph compares the percentage of Britain households
reagularly
using their own private transport over a period of 36 years.
Correct your spelling
regularly
Overall
, the population of people having one Linking Words
car
was the highest and stayed almost unchanged, Use synonyms
while
the number of Linking Words
household
with three or more Change to a plural noun
households
cars
was the Use synonyms
least
. It is Correct word choice
lowest
also
clear that the figures for no Linking Words
car
and two Use synonyms
cars
dramatically changed.
In 1971, almost half of the population of people in the UK had no Use synonyms
car
and the households having one Use synonyms
car
only were the second most populated group. Those with three Use synonyms
and
more Correct word choice
or
cars
had by far the Use synonyms
least
proportion of Correct word choice
lowest
population
with roughly 2 per cent of them and only 8% of households used two Add an article
the population
cars
.
Over the following 36 years, The percentage of families with one Use synonyms
car
almost Use synonyms
leveled
off Change the spelling
levelled
in
about 45% and remained the most popular group, Change preposition
to
while
the less number Linking Words
pf
people had no Correct your spelling
of
car
until Use synonyms
in
2007 there were only 25% of them. household started Change preposition
apply
havin
two Correct your spelling
having
havin'
cars
with a dramatic rise of around 20%, Use synonyms
although
three Linking Words
cars
and more category had an unconsiderable increase stayed under 8%.Use synonyms
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