Many olderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of trhis trend?
Nowadays,
people
who are living with their families
feel much more comfortable than others. Nevertheless
, most old age is bound by their families
to lives
in Wrong verb form
live
nursing
Add an article
a nursing
the nursing
home
and cares home
rather than their loved ones. There are pros and cons due to
these circumstances. In my point of view, the decision to place elderly
into Correct article usage
the elderly
care
homes is a complex situation, there should be based on individual’s
conditions and needs.
Recently, Correct article usage
the individual’s
care
house has become very popular because of
creating a tidy and neat atmosphere helps old Change preposition
apply
people
become friends and be able to communicate with each other. Homes
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Home
care
provides several conditions such
as suitable
environment, Correct article usage
a suitable
social
interaction. Correct word choice
and social
For example
, they build a community that suitable
for Add a missing verb
is suitable
elderly
to feel like they are at Correct article usage
the elderly
home
, it is appropriate for people
have
no children or relatives. Another example is that they have Correct pronoun usage
who have
opportunity
to Correct article usage
the opportunity
engaged
with their peers, reducing social isolation and loneliness. Change the form of the verb
engage
In addition
, they also
have a
professional Remove the article
apply
care
for elderly people
. In particular
, qualified nurses, workers
are trained properly so they can provide round-the-clock Correct word choice
and workers
care
and ensure that residents receive specialized assistance and medical attention when needed.
On the other hand
, living in these centers
causes some challenges. Change the spelling
centres
As a
survey conducted by Western Sydney University elaborates that when elderlies are away from their homes and Change preposition
A
families
, they usually faced
emotional problems as they feel Wrong verb form
face
being
Verb problem
left
left-out
and not being loved by their children. Another example is the relationship between grandpas/grandmas with grandkids is Correct your spelling
out
so
crucial not only for grandparents but Rephrase
apply
also
for youngsters to stay in a vibrant and lovely mood. Additionally
, nursing home
can be expensive for Fix the agreement mistake
homes
families
. Another disadvantage is that some elderly also
got
abused by nurses and doctors.
Wrong verb form
get
To sum up
, there are many advantages and disadvantages to this
matter while
the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In my opinion, I believe that it is depends
on Change the verb form
depends
families
conditions, and elderly Change the noun form
family
people
decision Change noun form
people's
well-being
Change preposition
on well-being
as well as
quality
of life.Add an article
the quality
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...