Many olderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of trhis trend?

Nowadays,
people
who are living with their
families
feel much more comfortable than others.
Nevertheless
, most old age is bound by their
families
to
lives
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in
nursing
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a nursing
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home
and cares
home
rather than their loved ones. There are pros and cons
due to
these circumstances. In my point of view, the decision to place
elderly
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into
care
homes is a complex situation, there should be based on
individual’s
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the individual’s
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conditions and needs. Recently,
care
house has become very popular because
of
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creating a tidy and neat atmosphere helps old
people
become friends and be able to communicate with each other.
Homes
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care
provides several conditions
such
as
suitable
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a suitable
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environment,
social
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and social
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interaction.
For example
, they build a community that
suitable
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is suitable
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for
elderly
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the elderly
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to feel like they are at
home
, it is appropriate for
people
have
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who have
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no children or relatives. Another example is that they have
opportunity
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to
engaged
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with their peers, reducing social isolation and loneliness.
In addition
, they
also
have
a
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professional
care
for elderly
people
.
In particular
, qualified nurses,
workers
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and workers
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are trained properly so they can provide round-the-clock
care
and ensure that residents receive specialized assistance and medical attention when needed.
On the other hand
, living in these
centers
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causes some challenges.
As a
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survey conducted by Western Sydney University elaborates that when elderlies are away from their homes and
families
, they usually
faced
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emotional problems as they feel
being
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left-out
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and not being loved by their children. Another example is the relationship between grandpas/grandmas with grandkids is
so
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crucial not only for grandparents but
also
for youngsters to stay in a vibrant and lovely mood.
Additionally
, nursing
home
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homes
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can be expensive for
families
. Another disadvantage is that some elderly
also
got
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abused by nurses and doctors.
To sum up
, there are many advantages and disadvantages to
this
matter
while
the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In my opinion, I believe that it
is depends
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on
families
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conditions, and elderly
people
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people's
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decision
well-being
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as well as
quality
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the quality
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of life.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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