Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, the source of information came from anywhere.

People

can get information from

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the internet

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internet

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the internet

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, television,

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newspapers

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, word of mouth, etc.

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also

affects

people

to find more

opinion

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opinions

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, including about

health

problem

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problems

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.

People

with

health

problem

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problems

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try to find

second

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opinion and

trying

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alternative

medicines

and treatments.

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essay will explore why

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situation is considered a negative development. One of the reasons is the safety issues. Many of those

alternative

medicines

and treatments

places

does

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not even have certification to run the

places

.

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is highly dangerous because there

are

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a lot of chance of malpractice that can worsen the

patients

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patient's

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health

problem

. The

patients

also

can not sue or

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for responsibility

to

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anyone since they purposely and consciously went into

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an unknown

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place without credibility &

certification

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and certification

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.

Other reasons

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Another reason

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why

this

situation is a negative development is criminal issues. Without

clear

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a clear

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and detailed background,

patient

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patients

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with

health

problem

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problems

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could

get

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apply

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easily get scammed by

the

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apply

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alternative

medicines

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medicines'

medicine's

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place

owner

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owners

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, especially if the

places

related

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are related

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with

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magic. There are some cases where the

patients

are taken into

cave

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in the jungle and get killed, or the more usual cases

is

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patients

are asked a hefty money for their service but the place owner

did

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not do anything to cure their

health

problem

. In conclusion, there are more disadvantages of

this

change of habit where

people

with

health

problem

tends to go to

alternative

medicines

and

treatments

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treatment

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places

instead

of doctor or hospital. It is better for

people

with

health

problems to directly

went

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to professionals or

places

that have legal and credible certification.