The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram presents the landscape design of Central Library 20 years ago and after changes were made.

This

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public library witnessed major changes both in the unpartitioned

area

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and the functional rooms

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the entrance gate and corner-side style remained the same.

Initially

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, the main

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consisted of 3 different zones 20 years ago and has been restructured with only 2 sections now. The adult fiction books section is shifted to the right side with the information desk and self-service station, replacing the adult factual books section that was formerly located.

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, the left side zone has been stored for all reference reading materials

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the tables and chairs were no longer placed in the centre of the

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, the empty space spans straight from the entrance gate.

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, a major transition occurred in each of the corner-located rooms of the library. At the left-hand corner from the entrance gate, the reading space has changed into a computer room

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the newly constructed café located crosswise. On the upper side, the children’s reading zone has transformed into a lecture room. Meanwhile, dramatic changes happened in the

area

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that was formerly intended as the entertainment space which has been redesigned for kids,

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as reading fiction books and having storytelling events.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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