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The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Three maps display the changes on the ground floor of
particular
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a particular
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 building over time. Over the time period, it can be clearly seen that functions have been
transform
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transforming
transformed
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 approximately every 25 years.
To begin
 with,
in
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from
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 1958 to 1984, there
were
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was
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 main circulation located at the center and 5 corridors connected to 7
office
 space facilities which were
meeting
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a meeting
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 room,
personal's
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personal
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 room, kitchen, toilet and reception
area
. After the first development, the
office
area
 was completely transformed
to
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into
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apartment
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an apartment
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 except the kitchen
in
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from
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 1985 to 2000. To explain,
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the manager
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manager
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manager's
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office
 and reception
area
 were converted into 2 bedrooms and functions on the other side were replaced by
living
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a living
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 room and bathroom. The most
noticeably
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noticeable
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 was the transformation
in
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from
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 2001 to
present
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the present
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, the functions have been changed into
flower
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a flower
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 shop which looked more open plan than before. The open
area
 for flower
were
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was
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 located on the left
center
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centre
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 and bottom right of the level
arounded
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surrounded
 by
play
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a play
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area
, gift cards, and
office
.
However
, one function that
was
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has
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 not changed since 1958 is
kitchen
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the kitchen
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.
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