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I agonized about two questions.
First,
why education
is unequal to students
all over the countries
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country
Second,
why Korean government don’t
protect teachers from infringement of teaching rights?
To commence with my story, I worked as a primary Verb problem
not
school
teacher
in two different school
in Change to a plural noun
schools
Korea
. One school
was full of students
with fully supported by parents. The other school
was full of students
with orpans
, multicultural Correct your spelling
orphans
organs
students
, and students
not getting attention from their parents. The latter school
students
’s academic competence was low and they were not sustainable about their feelings. I thought public education
must ensure them
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they
to
overcome their poor personal background. Fix the infinitive
apply
Therefore
, My ultimate goal is to contribute for
these two questions.
As soon as I Change preposition
to
came
back to Wrong verb form
come
Korea
, I will move my department to ‘Foreign language experience center
’ from my current position ‘Correct your spelling
Language Experience Center
Jinnam
Primary Change preposition
At Jinnam
school
’. In there, I will invent Capitalize word
School
education
program to teach Correct article usage
an education
students
with better understanding field of English and globalization. Even if the number of multicultural students
are
increasing, Change the verb form
is
their per cent
of Correct your spelling
the percentage
students
who drop out of school
are
increasing, too. In Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Korea
, still
there Add a comma
still,
are
discrimination Change the verb form
is
of
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against
multiculture
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multicultural
students
, and I want to enhance Korean student’s
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students’
multicuture
capability.
My mid-term goal is Correct your spelling
multicultural
multi culture
working
in Change the verb form
to work
Republic
of Uganda by being Correct article usage
the Republic
selectd
for the ‘Korean Government-sponsored Volunteer Teachers Program’. South Correct your spelling
selected
Korea
has inspired STEAM(Science, Techonology
, Correct your spelling
technology
Enginering
, Art and Mathematics) Correct your spelling
Engineering
education
from England. I was been taught about convergence between subjects and Add an article
a way
the way
way
to bring edu-technology to class when I was Fix the agreement mistake
ways
candidated
to get Correct your spelling
candidate
candidates
certification
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a certification
the certification
of
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as
first-rate
Correct article usage
a first-rate
teacher
. As Korea
borrowed the education
system from United
Kindom, I will help Uganda to introduce Correct article usage
the United
this
advanced system.
My long-term goal is organizing Field
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the Field
Teacher
Policy TF team. Korean teacher
training was inspired from
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by
British
model, which Add an article
the British
emphasize
pedagogical skills and ongoing professional development. Change the verb form
emphasizes
Therefore
, I could get full support from my government about progressing
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to progress
my
profession. There are Change preposition
in my
program
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programs
professional
learning Correct word choice
and professional
community
to train ourselves at Fix the agreement mistake
communities
school
. It was so helpful to me to teach studuents
. Even, Correct your spelling
students
Korea’s
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though Korea’s
teacher
have Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
a
professional skills Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
of
teaching, there is a problem of infringement of teaching authority. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, Sharing
my expertise with co-teachers that I learned from the module, find the problem of Wrong verb form
I share
Education
in Korea
and change the policy. I will create a safe environment to soley
focus on only Correct your spelling
solely
students
. These are my career plan
to realize my Fix the agreement mistake
plans
education
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