A growing number of people rely on restuarants and convenience food(frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?

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this
modern era,
every day
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number of people
are increase
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gradually
while
they need to more depends on hotels and other
redymade
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readymade
ready-made
package
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packaged
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food
for easy cook
instead
of
home made
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homemade
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food
to provide most of their menus. There are many
of
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prons
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pros
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and cons of consuming
this
type of eating
habits
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. I will give my inclination in
ensuring
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ensuing
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paragraphs. On the one hand, nowadays folks are
leaving
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in
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fast paced
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life so that they have
no
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not
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enough
time
to make their own meals.
First
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and foremost advantage is
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the
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time
and effort to
prepared
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it.
Moreover
, no more usage of utensils because every convenience
food
are
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available
to
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good
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the good
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package which
are
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directly
to
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put in
microwave
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the microwave
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and just ready in
few
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a few
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minutes.
As
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instance, Tesco Cheese pasta and sandwich, wasabi Susi, Pizza of Dominos.
Secondly
, no need
to
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any cooking skills
for
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prepare to them.
Moreover
, individual
having
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have
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a variety of
choice
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choices
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to select their
food
according to
their taste and budget.
On the other hand
, there are many demerits
also
connect
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with
this
Frozen
food
or packed
food
. One most important
that
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it
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there
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is not
any
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no
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proof regarding health concerns. Restaurant foods have more taste
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which
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that is
why
individual
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individuals
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having
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have
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a great portion or extra sometimes.
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,
individual
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individuals
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having
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have
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a
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no idea how much spices
added
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are added
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on
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that
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in addition
, they
could not
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cannot
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control the unhealthy ingredients.
However
,
this
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these
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types of meals are more expensive as
compare
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compared
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to
home cooked
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home-cooked
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dish
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dishes
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.
As
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example, if we
preparing
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prepare
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a balance
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balance
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dish at home might be approximately 20£ but
this
same plate price in
hotel
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the hotel
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is around 30£ or more if grand restaurants would take
extra
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an extra
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service charge. In
conclusions
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, it is
exceptable
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acceptable
that
persons
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people
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are more on
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a ready
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ready made
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diet because they
have
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do have
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not enough
time
to make them so that it's
save
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saves
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the
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money,
time
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and time
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and easy to prepare for anyone because not
required
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require
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any cooking skills.
But
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, it is not healthy
as well as
more expensive and nobody
sure
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about
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whether
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usage
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of ingredients
are
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is
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enough
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apply
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healthy or not.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rely on
  • restuarants
  • convenience food
  • frozen food
  • packaged meals
  • home-cooked food
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • variety of choices
  • cooking skills
  • health concerns
  • lack of control over
  • ingredients
  • expensive
  • potential
  • overeating
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