A growing number of people rely on restuarants and convenience food(frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?
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readymade
ready-made
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packaged
food
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of home made
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homemade
food
to provide most of their menus. There are many of
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prons
and cons of consuming Correct your spelling
pros
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living
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fast paced
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fast-paced
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not
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save
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have
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choices
food
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their taste and budget.
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, there are many demerits also
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or packed food
. One most important that
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is that
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there
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individuals
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individuals
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in addition
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types of meals are more expensive as Correct determiner usage
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home-cooked
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dishes
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example, if we Change preposition
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a balance
balance
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the hotel
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people
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ready made
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saves
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time
and easy to prepare for anyone because not Correct word choice
and time
required
any cooking skills. Change the form of the verb
require
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is
enough
healthy or not.Correct pronoun usage
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