The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to UN statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated bar chart provides comparative data about
death
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rates
and birth Use synonyms
rates
between 1970 and 2020 in Switzerland by UN statistics
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the birth Linking Words
rates
were increasing every year, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
death
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rates
had both increased and decreased.
It can be seen that there were 1.2 Use synonyms
million
new babies with no change in both 1975 and 1985. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
it
was a jump from 1.2 Correct pronoun usage
there
million
to 1.7 Use synonyms
million
for the birthrate in 1995. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the birth rate in 2005 Linking Words
was rise
dramatically to over 2.5 Change the verb form
rose
million
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, there was an upward trend from 2.7 Linking Words
million
to over 3.5 Use synonyms
million
from 2005 to 2025.
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On the other hand
, it is apparent that Linking Words
it
was an upward trend in the Correct pronoun usage
there
death
rate between 1975 and 1995, as it rose from 1 Use synonyms
million
to 1,5 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
However
, it changed to a downward trend Linking Words
in
1995 to 2025 because the number of Change preposition
from
individuals
Fix the agreement mistake
individual deaths
death
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chage
to less than 1 Correct your spelling
changed
million
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words death, rates, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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