The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. TASK 1 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.

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The architectural drawing illustrates the current site of an

Airport

which name called Southwest

Airport

Overall

, the

airport

will be transformed into a more modern and spacious facility. The current

Airport

consists of a runway, two terminals, and several; parking areas. The departure terminal consists of check-in on the north left corner and on the other side right

fornt

Correct your spelling

front

cafe. Security and passport control are next to the check-in counter. walkway facilitates reaching the runway with 8 gates. The

airport

will be redesigned to provide more spaces and better traffic flow by considering next year's plan. The redevelopment plans involve expanding the terminals adding new facilities and improving the runway parking areas.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

112 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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