Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages.

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has always prime concern of people
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helps to maintain better
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and kin.
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the advantages. To commence with, there are
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of enormous causative factors behind
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, as we are living in a
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world, we cannot
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outside entertainment,
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as well.
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time social
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several enjoyment
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programmes
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shows.
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, there are around 50% of utilizers
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. Despite having many advantages which
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some drawbacks.
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one of the prominent
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is that it may
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to
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bad
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with strangers. Apart from that the users
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deeply
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other unknown people
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they give debt their money
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through
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. It would chances to
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their money. To recapitulate.
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media
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has been by far the most indispensable part of every life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instantaneous communication
  • geographical barriers
  • information hub
  • breaking news
  • educational content
  • professional networking
  • industry experts
  • community support
  • privacy infringement
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • mental wellbeing
  • social comparison
  • online validation
  • cyberbullying
  • detriments
  • vulnerable individuals
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