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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statem

#future #nobody #newspapers #books #statem
Nowadays, It is believed by some echelons that neither newspapers nor books will be read in
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futures
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 because they will be superseded by online
applications
. As far as my opinion is concerned, I partially agree with
this
 statement, owing to
that
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 fact that though
the
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technology is vanishing the
paperbase
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paper base
paper based
 knowledge,
but
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it is not trustworthy all the
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. I will discuss both
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points with lucid examples in my upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
, technology has been playing
vast
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 role since the digital world
has been
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was
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 launched.
Moreover
, the established artificial
intelligency
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intelligence
 has
also
 played
significant
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 role
to ease
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 the system.
Therefore
, most
of
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the
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folks
has
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 started depending upon electronic media
than
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rather than
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 reading news and articles
on
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in
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papers
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paper
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.
For example
, if someone has to read any specific book,
then
 it can easily be read by using
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the kindle
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kindle
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 application rather
then
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than
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 going to the store and buying it.
Likewise
, trendy news
are
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 being read using news
applications
.
Apart from
this
, there is a search button to ferret any updates, which cannot be done on paperbase material. So the usage of papers and books
are
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 being replaced by
applications
 and e-books.
On the contrary
,
although
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 is successfully used by
the
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youngsters,
but
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there are few senior citizens left, who
does
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 not have sufficient knowledge about operating
such
applications
. They still like to stick
on
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to
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 newspapers and books.
Apart from
this
 fact,
specially
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the
old
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older
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- generation
also
possess
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 the hobby of reading.
Due to
which
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 they do not prefer to move to
applications
. Having irrelevant and
unneccesary
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unnecessary
 advertisements
also
 sometimes irritates the public
while
 using
such
 platforms.
To conclude
, though
web-apps
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web apps
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 have
the
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 huge role in demolishing
the
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papers,
but
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it has some serious
repurcussions
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repercussions
 of immaterial knowledge and
it
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 cannot fade away the interest
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 paper reading
from
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people.
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task response
Ensure that your essay directly addresses all parts of the question prompt. In this case, make sure to express your agreement or disagreement with the statement and provide a clear position.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear and logical structure throughout your essay. Ensure that your ideas are organized and flow smoothly from one to the next.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary by using a variety of words and phrases. This will help to make your essay more interesting and demonstrate your language proficiency.
grammatical range
Pay attention to your grammar and sentence structure. Avoid errors and make sure your sentences are clear and grammatically correct.
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