The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts display the amounts of electricity measured in units produced via Coal,Natural gas,Nuclear

power

,Oil and Hydropower from 1980 to 2000.

Overall

,it is evident from the chart that the dominant sources of fuel in

Australia

and

France

were Coal and nuclear

power

respectively,and the total production increased rapidly over the years.

To begin

with,In 1980, Coal produced 50% in

Austraila

Correct your spelling

Australia

and just

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half of petroleum

generated

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was generated

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France

However

,over the years, the figure for Coal skyrocketed to 130 units in

Australia

and that of

France

remained constant till 2000.

Furthermore

,Natural gas and oil were responsible for less than 30% in both countries and it reduced dramatically to

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apply

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less than 26% in 2000.

Furthermore

hydro

Correct your spelling

hydropower

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power

produced a significant value of fuel in

Australia

However

, just a small number was manufactured in

France

,but there was no production via nuclear

power

Australia

and it was the major source in

france

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France

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At the end

of the period, the total production of fuel in both countries rose rapidly to the same amounts at 170 units.

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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below, and make comparisons where relevant.

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