The graph below Shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The graph below Shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The line graph depicts the
number
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of shop closures and
openings
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in a specific country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
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, there was a downward trend in the
shops
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that closed and opened. At the beginning of the
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survey,
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the
openings
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were significantly higher than the opening,
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trend reversed by 2018. In 2012
openings
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drastically decreased, going from just under 9,000 in 2012 to around 4,000. The
number
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slightly increased over the years, reaching its peak in 2014 with just over 6,000
openings
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.
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data reached a new low in 2018 (3,000). Speaking about closures, the
number
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decreased over the years. In 2016, the
number
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of closed
shops
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reached its lowest point, under 1,000.
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number
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drastically increased in 2016 when just over 5,000
shops
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were closed.
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data remained quite stable in the following years. By 2018, the
number
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of closed
shops
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surpassed the
number
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of new
shops
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that opened.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, openings, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • number
  • shops
  • closed
  • opened
  • country
  • 2011
  • 2018
  • trend
  • downward trend
  • significantly
  • higher
  • steady decrease
  • relatively stable
  • reached
  • lowest point
  • slightly increased
  • gradual increase
  • surpassed
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