The graph below Shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The graph
illustates
shapes were closed and opened during the period, from 2011 to 2018 in a particular country.
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illustrates
Overall
, both indicators closed under the opening rate and openings
dramatically reduced.
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the next
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