The bar chart shows how many people came from 5 countries to Australia for business, holidays or to visit family and friends in 2017.
The chart illustrates the number of
visitors
coming from 5 different nations to Australia
for the purposes of business, vacation or visiting family and friends in 2017.
Overall
, it can be easily noticed that the largest number of visitors
came from China and New Zealand and most people came for a holiday
among other
2 countries, the United States and Japan, Correct article usage
the other
while
the British visitors
mainly came to see family and friends.
First of all, over 650,000 Chinese and almost 500,000 New Zealanders came with the purpose of holiday
. Although
Chinese holiday
visitors
were considerably more than New Zealanders’
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Zealanders
visitors
, both work and visiting purposes visitors
coming from New Zealand were slightly more than those coming from China.
Moreover
, there were similar trends among Japan and the USA visitors
for the reasons of travelling to Australia
. In both cases, the number of the
reasons why people came to Correct article usage
apply
Australia
were
the majority for a Correct subject-verb agreement
was
holiday
, followed by work, and
Interestingly, less than 500,000 Japanese travellers entered Correct word choice
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Australia
to visit other friends and relatives while
over 300,000 Britishs came. The UK’s figures represented a different scenario.Submitted by sonyso on
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