The charts below show the proportions of the wor/d's oíl resources he/din different areas, together with the proportions consumed annual/y in the same areas. Summarise the information by se/ecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts show the earth

oil

resources

proportions held in many zones,

together with

the consummation proportion in these same territories measured by year.

Overall

, the

Middle

East is the area with the highest percentage of total world

oil

resources

By contrast

, Asia and the United States have the biggest differences in the total world annual

oil

consumption

Firstly

, we can notice that the

Middle

East has more

oil

resources

than all the other presented areas with a percentage of 56,52%

while

the second country has only 14,84%. All these countries have similar low percentages but they are all very far from the

Middle

East's total

resources

Secondly

, when we look closer at the world's annual

oil

consumption

we see how three countries have a significantly higher

consumption

with more than 19,23% for Asia, U.S. and Western Europe.

However

, other countries like the

Middle

East, Central and South America and Eastern Europe seem to have percentages not so lower than all the other shown zones, Australia and New Zealand are the areas with the lower

oil

consumption

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