The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of Anthropology graduate students in terms of the type of job in one university, and the given table shows three types of occupation, freelance employment, government sector, and private companies, were investigated in terms of salaries for persons who have 5 years of precedent.
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