A magazine wants to include conntributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me the most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter - describe what this book was about - explain how this book influenced you - say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to write
this
letter to bring your interest to the booklet that influenced me the most named "Rich Dad Poor Dad". Firstly
, I appreciate the work you are doing to aware youth about reading and its benefits.
Initially
, this
book helps to differentiate the thinking of the rich and poor communities. To explain further
, it is the best example to show how rich people work on assets for a happy life. Secondly
, this
edition is beneficial to educate people about taking risks in life instead
of sticking to office hours, especially at an early age. Moreover
, in this
competitive world, learning skills such
as coding and starting own business is significant to developing a career.
This
book not only influenced me to take risks in growth but was also
useful in understanding the power of knowledge. This
means that this
is beneficial for my personal growth. Furthermore
, these kinds of textbooks remind us about hard work as well as
saving time in our lives.
If I have to recommend any single edition that can change someone's growth, I would suggest this
textbook as it plays a crucial role to motivate, in addition
, and disciplining them in their future. Last
but not least, I am waiting for your response on this
booklet and thanks for your assistance.
Yours faithfully,
Gurpinder KaurSubmitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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