A magazine wants to include conntributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me the most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter - describe what this book was about - explain how this book influenced you - say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you are doing well. I would like to write
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letter to bring your interest to the booklet that influenced me the most named "Rich Dad Poor Dad".
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, I appreciate the work you are doing to aware youth about reading and its benefits.
Initially
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,
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book helps to differentiate the thinking of the rich and poor communities. To explain
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, it is the best example to show how rich people work on assets for a happy life.
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,
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edition is beneficial to educate people about taking risks in life
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of sticking to office hours, especially at an early age.
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, in
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competitive world, learning skills
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as coding and starting own business is significant to developing a career.
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book not only influenced me to take risks in growth but was
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useful in understanding the power of knowledge.
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means that
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is beneficial for my personal growth.
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, these kinds of textbooks remind us about hard work
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saving time in our lives. If I have to recommend any single edition that can change someone's growth, I would suggest
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textbook as it plays a crucial role to motivate,
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, and disciplining them in their future.
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but not least, I am waiting for your response on
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booklet and thanks for your assistance. Yours faithfully, Gurpinder Kaur
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Task Response
Ensure that all parts of the prompt are addressed in the letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make the greeting and closing more formal to match the tone of the letter.
Lexical Resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource.
Grammatical Range
Attempt more complex sentence structures to improve grammatical range.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • profound impact
  • tackles
  • racism
  • prejudice
  • injustice
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • struggles
  • challenges
  • injustices
  • discrimination
  • equality
  • power of perspective
  • biases
  • prejudices
  • unique story
  • passing judgment
  • moral message
  • memorable characters
  • role model
  • integrity
  • commitment to justice
  • voice for the voiceless
  • defender of truth
  • timeless themes
  • powerful storytelling
  • pressing social issues
  • relevant today
  • question the status quo
  • thought-provoking
  • inspiring
  • profound influence
  • shaped my perspective
  • creating a more just and equal world
  • impact and resonate
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