yu are looking for a part time job at a football club. write a letter to your manager 1. introduce yourself 2. share your experience 3. explain when you can start

Dear Sir, My name is Jeevitha, I am writing
this
email to apply for the part-time job advertised in the newspaper on the 5th of October 2023. I would like to inform
that
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you that
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I started
practicing
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practising
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football
since
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when
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I was a child and I
have
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had
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extraordinary
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an extraordinary
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experience
in
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of
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playing
this
game when I was back in Spain. I participated in many international matches,
also
I won multiple trophies for my achievements.
In addition
, I was coaching the Brazil team on
counter attacks
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for
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the world
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world cup
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World Cup
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championship in the year 2014. I moved to Toronto considering various personal commitments,
since
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and since
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then
I
was
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looking for a job opportunity to continue my passion and train future players. Herewith, I have attached my detailed resume
that
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which
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shares my wide range of skills and experiences that I had. I would really appreciate it if you could consider my application for
this
position to foster my skills.
Furthermore
, I am ready to start my service anytime if the offer is granted. I really appreciate your time and consideration in
this
regard. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Thank you, Jeevitha.
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to address the manager and introduce yourself clearly in the opening sentence.
coherence cohesion
Provide specific examples or achievements to support your experience in playing and coaching football.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to make your letter more engaging and impressive.
grammatical range
Check the verb tenses and sentence structures to ensure accuracy and clarity.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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