Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people 's reading and writing skills .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Even Though it is widely believed that using modern gadgets
have
negatively impacted the younger generation’s literal abilities, I disagree with that common perception Correct subject-verb agreement
has
that
I will present Correct word choice
apply
other point
of view to perceive the subject in Change the wording
another point
other points
this
essay.
To begin
with, the common variable to measure the society's level of literacy is the proportion of the
illiterate Correct article usage
apply
people
. Thus
, with the help of nowadays communication technology has made a big contribution in
decreasing the Change preposition
to
amount
of illiterate youngsters in many countries. That can be realized as so many reading materials are distributed every second around the world including to the isolated regions in the third world country via phones and computers. Nowadays news Change the quantifier
number
are
easily spread through electronic media, web browsers can present almost everything that we want to learn as long as we can read and write. Change the verb form
is
Therefore
, this
acceleration in the process of sharing information encourages so many people
to engage in writing and reading activity
as the community around the younger generation runs with Fix the agreement mistake
activities
this
new age of communication.
On the other hand
in the era of industrial
revolution 4.0, we have to adapt Correct article usage
the industrial
with
the fast pace of content exchange, Change preposition
to
thus
traditional ways of reading and writing on paper for a long period of time no longer comply when people
demand to get to the point as soon as possible. For
instance
in today's culture of literature, Add a comma
instance,
people
jump from one article to another, five hundred page books are compacted into 5 minute
videos, students no longer go to the local library to find a book yet they browse the internet Add a hyphen
5-minute
then
find the rarest electronic book from another part of the world. That is
something beyond the old reading culture. For
this
reason, the methods to read and write must be revised to suit this
acceleration of the learning process.
In conclusion, it is not that younger generations are undergoing a decline in their capacity to read and write caused by extensive
use of gadgets. Correct article usage
the extensive
Contrastly
, they are on the brink of breaking through to the new era of Rephrase
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information
revolution.Add an article
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