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Is freedom of speech viral in free society? Agree or disagree?

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 society .It is undeniable that expressing one’s own opinion has become
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 of our sovereign life.
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,there is no absolute agreement on having
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attitude
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 yourself. A commonly held belief is that
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 often share their strong perspectives at enormous meetings,
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public to show that they can raise problems
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 society
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 their speech and
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 getting popular nowadays.
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,
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 can find
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people
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 who will bolster their unique ideas. In my estimation, having your personal opinion and
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 it is
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people
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 get one’s own way. As
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, it leads to
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hope
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 you won’t be the only one who has
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opinion
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 you, because of
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 community.
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,some
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 claim that, if you say something yours or something wrong, you will have hate on your side and everyone else won’t accept you.
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, they may mention that you are very aboveboard with your
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. But,
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 think ,sometimes we need to take an example from bloggers. They are not afraid of haters and their words can affect
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their followers.
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,
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people
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 who can withstand criticism with words alone,
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 the best example of liberty of speech. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account
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 would argue that, by outstanding speaking
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 of their
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.
Consequently
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 ,freedom of speech is real and pervasive in our community where needed

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on one main idea and develops it clearly and logically.
coherence cohesion
Provide a clearer and more concise introduction and conclusion.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more effectively.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to enhance clarity and accuracy.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of speech
  • Democratic society
  • Marketplace of ideas
  • Dissenting opinions
  • Social progress
  • Innovation
  • Government accountability
  • Transparency
  • Good governance
  • Cultural development
  • Personal freedom
  • Self-realization
  • Public debate
  • Human rights
  • Liberties
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