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Is freedom of speech necessary in free society? Agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
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 society. Now
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 are beginning to realize that they can not express their opinion, because of some laws, which
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 of expression. Personally, I tend to think that
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 are correct in our society
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because no one can condemn someone arguing that he can express as liberty of
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, it is well known that liberty of
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 your opinion or
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 certainly information without violating the law. What I mean here is that a person's violation is limited by the law, public view and his own conscience. One of the main reasons behind
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 when expressing yourself, observe the norms of the law and take into account the rights of other
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, propaganda of social, racial, national, religious or linguistic superiority is prohibited. A good case in point is speaking badly
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, about an LGBT rally that took place in Serbia, your interlocuter may disagree with
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 of
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 person. He can sustain
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 when you condemn it. On
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 hand, it can be
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 argued that
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 can overturn the meaning of "
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 of
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" for their own selfish purposes.
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 to say using it as
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 to spread hatred, discrimination or violence.
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 can happen in various fields,
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 as politics, social networks, or media. Take
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 who may use liberty of
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 to spread false information,
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and provoke
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 leaders,
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 reason can lead to conflicts in society and a threat to national security.
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people
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 can use free expression to promote their own businesses or political interests. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that without
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 of
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, it would be difficult to ensure a free and open discussion and develop science and culture,
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 protect the rights and liberties of citizens.

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Task Response
Ensure that you fully address the prompt and provide a clear opinion on whether freedom of speech is necessary in a free society. Present arguments to support your opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on the organization and structure of your essay. Consider using paragraphs to separate your ideas and provide a clear introduction and conclusion.
Lexical Resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use more varied and precise language. Avoid repetition and consider using synonyms and different sentence structures.
Grammatical Range
Pay attention to your grammar and sentence structure. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and vary the length and complexity of your sentences.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of speech
  • Democratic society
  • Marketplace of ideas
  • Dissenting opinions
  • Social progress
  • Innovation
  • Government accountability
  • Transparency
  • Good governance
  • Cultural development
  • Personal freedom
  • Self-realization
  • Public debate
  • Human rights
  • Liberties
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