Some people say that adverstising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.Other people thing that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A few individuals believe that

adverstising

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advertising

is very

essentials

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essential

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to make us

buying

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buy

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items. I concede that

ads

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are required to buy

products

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from the market. Below both

viwes

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views

are illustrated. Advertisement is very much

need

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needed

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buys

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buy

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things because people can

aware

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be aware

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products

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by seeing

ads

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. Without any acknowledgement how

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are we

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aware of

products

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For

Linking Words

example

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example,

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acko insurance

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Acko Insurance

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is very famous in

india

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India

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because we

are seeing

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see

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Fully explain your ideas

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

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Some people say that adverstising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.Other people thing that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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Write a 250-word essay for the topic: Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What problems does this cause and what are some solutions to these problems?

Topic: the rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?