Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?
In today's era, technology is doing wonders for
people
in every sector making the lives of people
better and easier than ever. Most of the work
areas nowadays are being governed by the
up-to-date machinery and automation. Correct article usage
apply
Eventhough
the implementation of modern tools and techniques Correct your spelling
Even though
have
revolutionised the old way of performing Correct subject-verb agreement
has
work
in a positive manner, but
there are Correct word choice
apply
also
some demerits that come along when we depend on it more than required. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the above stated
points in detail with suitable examples.
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above-stated
To begin
with, before the advent of technology performing any task at work
was a very time consuming
and tedious Add a hyphen
time-consuming
job
. Advancements in the field of automation has
enabled humans to get their Change the verb form
have
job
done within a short moment of time, ranging from making an excel
sheet to submitting an assignment. Capitalize word
Excel
Along with
this
most of the business meetings are now held through web conferencing by sitting at their homes, for which people
have to travel thousands of miles in earlier times. For instance
, according to
a survey, after the implementation of modern tools and techniques in the working sector there has been a considerable decrease in the amount of time and effort needed for getting a job
done opening a lot of job
opportunities in this
sector.
Furthermore
, as more and more people
are making the most out of the
modern technology, they have ultimately become lazy as one can have the liberty of having anything with just a click of a button. Correct article usage
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This
has a huge negative impact on the health of the people
making them susceptible to diseases and also
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avarage
life span. Correct your spelling
average
For example
, according to
the Ministry of Health, after introduction
of modern automation Add an article
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there has been a shocking 35 per cent incline in the cases of obesity and Add a comma
options,
40
per cent rise in the cases of cardiovascular diseases.
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a 40
To sum up
, though
modern technological advancements are taking over most of the Correct word choice
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work
sectors helping humans in doing
their intricate jobs very easily. Individuals ought not to forget the dark side that Change preposition
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come
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comes
tagged
Verb problem
apply
along with
this
and it's their responsibility to make the best out of it for themselves as well as
for the workplace.Submitted by mrigankingley2099 on
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