You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Ashkan,
I hope
this
letter finds you and your family well. Since the last
time we met each other, I have been looking for a new place to live in the centre of the town, until the
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last
week when I finally
got one.
I think I have already told you about the main reason for my relocation, and how daily commuting from the outskirts to my workplace was time-consuming and devastating. Besides
, there is another reason that I have not told you yet, and that is
my new girlfriend with whom I am going to live in this
new house.
Our new place is located in the 12th avenue, just beside the central park of the town. It consists of a large living room with a nice view out to the park, two bedrooms which seem to be designed in a way that perfectly suits us. In addition
to that, we also
have a beautiful garden that gives us the opportunity to bring a pet to play around.
I am eager to invite you to my new place as soon as I settle there, and that would be this
weekend, I guess, so don't forget to prepare yourself for a huge housewarming party.
I will be in touch we you.
Best Wishes
Arash,Submitted by greatsoloist on
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task achievement
Provide more details and examples regarding the reasons for the move.
coherence cohesion
Use transitional words or phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to add more variety to your descriptions.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to ensure accuracy.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite