the charts below give information about levels of education in glasgow in 2010

the charts below give information about levels of education in glasgow in 2010
The provided 2 graphs have depicted the
characterisitics
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characteristics
of
educational
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the educational
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population
in Glasgow during 2010, including both the gender and
age
distribution
accordingly
.
This
aids our understanding
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the educational tendency among
age
and gender in Glasglow during that period of time. Interestingly, the proportion of
female
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females
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and
male
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males
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having different educational
level
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levels
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, regardless of
age
, was somehow evenly
ditributed
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distributed
. That means, on obtaining university, school or none of the recognition, all of them
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accounted for around one-third of the
overall
population
respectively.
However
, when we look closer into
age
distribution,
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to
50 year old
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50-year-old
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population
shared
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proportion with different
qualification
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qualifications
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with a ratio of seven to two to one, ranging from degree to
scondary
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secondary
school graduation to no certification correspondingly. Meanwhile, the number of university graduates dropped
while
that of no qualification rose when people aged from 50 onwards. Contrarily, no
qualificaiton
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qualification
qualifications
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to the majority of the
population
in
aged
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75 or above group (70%), and vice versa for the group of 16 to 50. In conclusion, the data illustrated that the degree of civilization was similar between different genders
while
variation showed at different
age
groups.
This
information is useful for policymakers to understand our social landscape.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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  • Levels of education
  • Glasgow
  • 2010
  • Charts
  • Data
  • Information
  • Overview
  • Education levels
  • Males
  • Females
  • Comparing
  • Trends
  • Patterns
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