You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how you heard the news • arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house • explain what you will bring with you

#news #friend #time #visit #house

Daer

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Dear

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Ana, How are you?

Your

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You're

You are

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doing

good

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well

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? I am writing regarding

for

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apply

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what I hear from you. Actually 2 days back I heard

this

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the

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news that you

are

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have

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pass

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passed

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the bar exam.

Furthermore

, I heard

this

news from

our

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classmate before in college because her son and my son

issame

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is same

same

school. The school

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was

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celebrating

there

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their

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family day

lasy 2

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almost two

days ago so Kendra and I

are gossiping

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gossiped

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about our college life

before

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apply

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until she told me that you

pass in

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passed

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the board exam. I am very happy for you friend.

Moreover

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apply

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saturday

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Saturday

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I am free my husband will go to

other country

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another country

other countries

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for

seminar

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a seminar

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. I just to clarify if you still living in your

parents

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parent's

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house

beacuse

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because

I plan to visit on

saturday

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Saturday

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at 6:00 in the evening. I will bring some barbeque sticks and fish to

grill

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the grill

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so that

while

doing grilling we can chit chat.

Furthermore

, I will bring some hotdogs for the kids and

ofcourse

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of course

I am bringing our

favorite

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favourite

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wine. Warm regards,

Austia

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Austria

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coherence cohesion

Use a more formal and appropriate greeting and closing for a letter.

coherence cohesion

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task achievement

Ensure that the letter fully addresses all the points mentioned in the prompt.

task achievement

Use a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

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