You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how you heard the news • arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house • explain what you will bring with you

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Daer

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Dear

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Ana, How are you?

Your

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You're

You are

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doing

good

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well

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? I am writing regarding

for

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apply

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what I hear from you. Actually 2 days back I heard

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this

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the

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news that you

are

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have

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pass

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passed

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the bar exam.

Furthermore

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, I heard

this

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news from

our

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classmate before in college because her son and my son

issame

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is same

same

school. The school

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was

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celebrating

there

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their

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family day

lasy 2

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almost two

days ago so Kendra and I

are gossiping

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gossiped

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about our college life

before

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apply

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until she told me that you

pass in

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passed

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the board exam. I am very happy for you friend.

Moreover

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apply

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saturday

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Saturday

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I am free my husband will go to

other country

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another country

other countries

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for

seminar

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a seminar

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. I just to clarify if you still living in your

parents

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parent's

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house

beacuse

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because

I plan to visit on

saturday

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Saturday

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at 6:00 in the evening. I will bring some barbeque sticks and fish to

grill

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the grill

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so that

while

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doing grilling we can chit chat.

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, I will bring some hotdogs for the kids and

ofcourse

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of course

I am bringing our

favorite

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favourite

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wine. Warm regards,

Austia

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Austria

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve coherence.

coherence cohesion

Use a more formal and appropriate greeting and closing for a letter.

coherence cohesion

Provide more details and specific examples to support your points.

task achievement

Ensure that the letter fully addresses all the points mentioned in the prompt.

task achievement

Use a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied.He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live.
Subject: Finding a place to live

You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how you heard the news • arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house • explain what you will bring with you

The Greeting

In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasizes that their products are new in some way. Why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunitybto help others. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied.He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live.