The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart presents the yearly income distribution of US total
households
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in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Clearly, the annual earnings of $75,000-$99,999 made the lowest share of
overall
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households
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in the US over 8 years
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the annual earnings of $50,000-$74,999 was the only range that remained constant from 2007 until 2015. Meanwhile, the highest proportion of yearly income fluctuated throughout the year. In 2007, US families who lived with
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100,000 million salary each year made up nearly 30% of the total housewifery.
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proportion is followed by more than 25% of US families who earned $25,000-$49,999 yearly revenue
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25% of them lived with fewer than $25,000 annual income.
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trend slightly changed 4 years later,
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the US
households
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were dominated by those with annual earnings of $25,000-$49,999. 4 years later, the trend looked similar to the 2007 conditions though there were different percentages for each annual salary category. US families who maintain their living cost with a yearly revenue range of $100,000 and more bounced back which covers more than 30% of US
households
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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