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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the treatment of
waste
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products
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 in three different
countries
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, namely,
Republic
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the Republic
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 of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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 and
United
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the United
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 Kingdom.
Overall
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,
waste
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products
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 are managed in five different ways, with recycling and burying underground being the most preferred
method
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methods
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 in some of the
countries
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. In
Korea
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, 69% of
waste
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products
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 are recycled,
in
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contrast
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contrast,
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 the
UK
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 does
no
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not
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waste
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products
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 but
Sweden
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 recycles more than
one third
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one-third
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 of
Korea
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's
rate
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. All
countries
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 bury some of their
waste
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products
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 underground, with the
UK
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 recording the highest
rate
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 at a wildly 82% against
Sweden
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's
rate
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 of 55%.
Korea
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 recorded a figure of 9% which is almost
one nineth
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one-ninth
 of
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the Uk's
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Uk's
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UK's
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rate
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. In the incineration of refuse, all
countries
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 used
such
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method
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a method
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, with the highest
rate
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 recorded by
Sweden
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 at 20%, which is more than twice as high as
Korea
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's
rate
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 but ten times the
rate
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 of
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the Uk's
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Uk's
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UK's
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 figure.
Furthermore
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, the
UK
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 treats some of its garbage by using chemical treatment or dumping
at
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it at
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 sea, a practice
that is
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 not applied to the treatment of refuse in the two other
countries
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, products, countries, korea, sweden, uk, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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