Working is taking a more important role in people's lives. Why are people working so much? Do you think this trend is good or bad?

Working is

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part of people's

lives

. They always try to get a good job and

work

for years.

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topic in both opinions. First of all, it is known that working takes part an important role in our

lives

. even we choose and decide what will be our dream job from childhood. it takes several steps like

begin

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going

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to

schools

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school

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,

then

university and

finally

graduation and

work

will be waiting for us. we

work

because we want to gain experience and earn money. Both men and women try to get the best offer for their job. when they

work

they can get what they want.

for example

,

in

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result

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the result

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of working they can purchase different

metrials

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materials

material

thing

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things

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which can make their life much better. like

car

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cars

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,

house

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houses

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, clothes and several things like

this

.

besides

of

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this

, people sometimes

work

so much and it affects their

lives

on negative sides. even though they get

high

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a high

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salary

but

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they can not spend time with their families.

as

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a result

first

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they become exhausted and unhappy as well. we all know that

to be

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being

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rich does not make

everyon

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everyone

thrilled.

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, some families get divorced because of

men's

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men

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working long hours. they claim that we can not spend time together and it

makes

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creates

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a lack of commitment between couples. in conclusion, we know working is

main

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part of our

lives

. in my opinion, if people make

balance

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a balance

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between

work

and private life, it will make them on nine clouds.