In the recent times, the only way to see pieces of art or historical artefacts was by visiting public museums and galleries. Nowadays, people can admire them on the internet. In my opinion such places as galleries and museum should exist for finacial and enterteiment reasons.

In the recent times, the only way to see pieces of

art

or historical artefacts was by visiting public

museums

and galleries. Nowadays, people can admire them on the internet. In my

opinion

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such

places as galleries and

museum

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museums

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should exist for

finacial

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financial

and

enterteiment

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entertainment

reasons.

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with, using

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the internet

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internet

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is only possible to look at museum objects

by

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the eye of the camera and

this

metod

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method

can not give a full experience of sightseeing. Technological

items

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quality is not good

enought

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enough

to catch every

detial

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detail

of works of

art

. Take my trip to

Louvre

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for

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example, the famous Mona Lisa picture was quite different in real life than it was when I

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saw it online. In the

art

gallery

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gallery,

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i

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was able to see even the texture of paints, which

was enable

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to admire on the computer.

As a result

of increase in the online

museums

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museum

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visitors, the

art

piecies

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pieces

piece

will become less impresing for people. In conclusion, the only way to fully enjoy

hisrorical

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historical

or artistic artefacts is by seeing them personally. Another reason for

museum

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and

art

galleries to exist is to keep the

art

piecies

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pieces

piece

in good condition. Objects that

quite

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old need good conservation to keep their beauty.

For instance

,

visitors

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paying

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for

enter

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tickets,

the

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great amount of their money is used to clean and preserve paintings. Without

regullary

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regularly

regular

dusting and keeping them in the special glass box they will break down.

To conclude

without public

museums

there could be not

enought

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enough

money to keep

art

alive. To summarise, the

palce

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place

like

art

gallieries

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galleries

or

museums

give people full

expirience

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experience

of admiring

art

and history.

In

addition

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seeing

this

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these

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piecies

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pieces

personally are making able to keep them in the same condition for many years.