The diagram illustrates the stages of composting recycled organic waste to produce a natural fertilizer for the garden.
The diagram demonstrates how
fertilizer
is made from organic product rubbish.
Looking from an overall
perspective, the whole process
comprises two main stages, namely preparation
and composting Correct article usage
the preparation
process
. The whole process
begins with taking a plastic container
and ends with prepared fertilizer
.
Firstly
, preparation
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the preparation
process
consists three
steps, with the first step whereChange preposition
of three
2
cubic meter plastic Correct article usage
a 2
container
is prepared. Holes of the container
enable airflow which is necessary for composting. The second step is filling the container
with 15 cm layers of organic wastes, such
as food scraps, grass and newspaper. Afterwards, some hot water and nitrogen are added to this
mixture. Chemical substances are accelerates
Wrong verb form
accelerate
transformation
of natural wastes.
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the transformation
Then
the second stage begins with closing the tank and natural heat stimulates mixture
inside the Correct article usage
the mixture
container
. During the next 6 months mixture is composted and brand-new green fertilizer
is made. Fertilizer
is essential for utilizing it in the garden.Submitted by altuha9507 on
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