The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The data illustrates the current state of Bunborough Village

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the renovation plans for 2024.

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, the place is planned to undergo several changes, the biggest ones being the construction of the railway and the development of tourism facilities

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as hotels. At present, there's only one

road

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connecting the village with the main motorway,

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, in the future, an alternative route is planned to be built to create better access for people travelling to Lynwich. Adjacent to a new

road

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according to

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the proposed plan, there are going to be two hotels constructed on different sides of the river, one close to the newly built promenade in the city, and the other right next to the beach.

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besides

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the

road

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, a new railway is planned to be built running through the city from south to north.

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such

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a big development will cause the movement of two houses to the other side of the

road

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, to enable the creation of the railway station. At the moment there are three piers in the fishing port.

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the plan, only one of those will remain and a new promenade will be built

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Anticipation
Significant
Conversion
Commercial activities
Expansion
Enhancing
Bypassing
Congestion
Connectivity
Recreational area
Demolition
Infrastructure
Preservation
Public transportation hub
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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? It is a possible or negative development?

living in a country where you have to speak a foreigen language can cause seriouse social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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