The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
illustration depicts the
plastic
recycling process.
Overall
, smaller
plastic
items and bags are discarded in landfills,
while
some
plastic
products,
such
as bottles, are recycled after use. The recycling procedure for gathered
plastic
garbage is described in the paragraphs that follow. At
first,
recyclable
plastic
garbage that has been collected is brought to a sorting plant. After being divided into groups
according to
colour, shape, and size, the
plastics
are
then
temporarily held in the facility's warehouse until they are moved on to the following step of the procedure. The sorted
plastics
are
then
driven by trucks to the location of the
last
processing step. Once at the factory, which is specifically designed for processing
plastic
trash, the
plastics
are subjected to heat to cause melting. After being melted, the
plastics
are reshaped into new products. These three steps result in
plastic
bottles being transformed into new products which are
then
offered to customers through retail establishments.
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