The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a The Particular region between 1985 and 2005.

The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a The Particular region between 1985 and 2005.
The given line graph illustrates how many
people
participated in 4 different types of sports in one region over a
period
of 20 years (1985-2005).
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that at the beginning of the
period
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the most popular type of sport was rugby followed by tennis, which took the lead. The figures for
people
taking part in basketball and badminton remained steady,
while
the popularity of rugby had a significant decline. Looking at the details, in 1985, the number of
people
who played rugby was the highest at under 250
people
followed by those who played tennis at 150
people
,
however
, the latter took a lead in 1990 outnumbering tennis at 200
people
.
In contrast
, at the beginning of the
period
,
people
who took part in basketball and badminton were roughly identical, around 70 and 50
people
respectively. The figures for these types remained stable for most of the
period
shown.
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