Write about the following topic: In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In recent days, many

countries

have claimed that global

tourism

has enlarged as a significant source of foreign

currenct

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currency

current

flow into national

threasures

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treasures

. Even

this

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economic outcome has negative effects

for

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on

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a

country

, international

tourism

is effective

to attract

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in attracting

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new entrepreneurs.

In addition

to

this

,

this

interaction provides

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environment for cultural exchange in the long term.

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essay will discuss why the merits

outweight

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outweigh

the drawbacks cristal

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. International

tourism

activities

such

as

excurtions

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excursions

, sea sports, or exhibitions

attact

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attract

attack

interested foreigners and businessmen to a

country

.

While

they are enjoying their vacations in different

countries

, they contribute

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economy of these

countries

during their visits. To illustrate

this

, an average European family can spend 300 dollars a day in Antalya, a famous summer holiday district in Turkey, which is

drammatically

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dramatically

grammatically

raising the local hotels and

stores

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finance.

Moreover

, during these kinds of visits, businessmen might be interested to invest or start up a new business there. Eventually, their expenditure on a family holiday, not only

do improve

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local businesses, but it

also

affects the

country

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economy benefically. The

tourism

sector

also

increase

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the chance of cultural exchange between tourists and locals. The citizens of a

country

can learn different cultural heritages and lifestyles from strangers.

Therefore

, tourists could learn habits or cultural items about a nation.

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the

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a

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result

this

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interaction, when tourists have returned

their

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to their

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hometowns they can share their experiences in the city or

country

which they have visited.

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action might enhance the popularity of the

touristic

country

or city. In conclusion, being a

touristic

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tourist

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attraction for a

country

might be considered as

negative

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or positive reputation because of

this

label'

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effects. Nowadays, the

tourism

sector has increased the popularity of

touristic

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tourist

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countries

. Ultimately, foreign families and philanthropic businessmen have utilized the currency flow into

countries

. These interactions outweigh the demerits of

touristic

activities for

countries

.