The graphs shows the annual income of language-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.

The graphs shows the annual income of language-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.
The bar graph illustrates the
earnings
of three languages-related works-interpreter,
translator
, and
language
teacher-in
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every year in five places, namely Mexico, Dubai, Paris, Munich, and
Toronto
.
Overall
,
Toronto
has the highest
earnings
, and it is dominated by interpreter work.
On the other hand
, Mexico has the lowest income among the cities with
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number
of
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in each job.
Firstly
,
Toronto
experiences
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the highest annual income among the five places. Similar
with
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Munich, the interpreter job in
Toronto
reaches the biggest
number
of
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with more than $70,000. The annual earning has a slight decrease to approximately $65,000 for the
translator
and
language
teacher works.
Additionally
, in Munich and Dubai, the
translator
and
language
teacher have a
number
of income more than $60,000 every year.
In contrast
, the
language
teachers in Paris get less
earnings
around $45,0000 compared to
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and
interpreter
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which have a moderate rise to more than $60,000.
Lastly
, Mexico gets the lowest
earnings
in
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compared to the other four cities. There are similar
number
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of annual incomes in three categories, which are around $19,000.
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