The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city via three means of communication, between January and June
in 2011.
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and via telephone
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written letters and emails
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of enquiries in person
experienced the most dramatic change among the different options.
In January, the Tourist Information Office received 900 telephone
enquiries, while
just under 800 letters and emails
were received. Not many tourists chose to ask for information in person
, with just over 400 queries. Over the next three months, the telephone
still remained the most popular method of enquiry, at
approximately 1000 queries.
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