Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: •Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style.

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Dear Mr. Mathew, I’m writing

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complaint letter to inform you how keep barking habit of your new small

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for almost 24 hours every day has disturbed my family’s peaceful life. I’m not sure

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has not been noticeable to you yet.

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, either you should focus on hiring an animal trainer to train your

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or you may consider my suggestion to resolve

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issue. First of all, a

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expert can not only guide your pet on how to live in an urban area but

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may be able to find the reason why your

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has

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kind of weird nature.

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, employing a trainer might seem to you a little expensive. So, as I’ve noticed that you do not take your

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to an outdoor walk daily,

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might be a reason why your pet may be frustrated

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having indoor life only. Please take action to avoid

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happening.

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, I need to report the building society to take action against you in accordance with the

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bylaw of our municipality. Let me know if I can be helpful for anything. Your neighbour, Harpal Singh

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve coherence and cohesion.

lexical resource

Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource.

grammatical range

Pay attention to the use of articles and prepositions to improve grammatical range.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

192 words

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